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Charger
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Singapore
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 Posted - 2012/11/03 : 10:47:57
This is dedicated to all hardcore fans of Sword Art Online :)
Below's the link to the free download of the track:
FREE DOWNLOAD
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D-tor
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United States
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 Posted - 2012/11/03 : 17:06:53
I dunno man, it feel like the vocals anything at all. It also feels massively out of key at times. Needs a lot of tune up in my opinion.
Was hoping for a Sword Art Online remix too.
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Samination
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Sweden
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195 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2012/11/03 : 17:55:06
alot of the track sounds out of place to be honest
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Charger
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Singapore
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Posted - 2012/11/03 : 18:56:11
Was actually trying to play around with some chords for the lead. I'd actually knew this issue about the key might come to haha.
Cheers for your comments anyway :)
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cruelcore1
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Croatia (Hrvatska)
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Posted - 2012/11/03 : 19:05:14
You've got plenty of talent and inspiration, but your track is mostly out of key or harmony.
For melodies being played in the same time, they all need to have at least 1 theoretical chord-line in common, and be in the same music key. You can make exceptions of course, but only if they sound good. As for bass and similar stuff, they are recommended to follow the root note of current theoretical chord.
I recommend creating theoretical chords for every part of the track that should have different harmony (just keep in mind that there can be more options for a single melody). That will make things easier as you will have help writing or making up your melody. and with creating chords that are actually going to be played in the track (which are usually re-arranged theoretical chords).
If you don't feel like bothering yourself making theoretical chords, check inside your mind for melodies (which should be combined) to suit each other. That's how you'll check if they are harmonic.
As for the music key, you'll hardly figure that out within your mind, yo you'll have to adjust it within your program.
I suggest you to remake this remix fixing keys, harmony and stuff, because you have talent that should not be wasted.
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Charger
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Singapore
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Posted - 2012/11/04 : 03:38:58
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Originally posted by cruelcore1:
You've got plenty of talent and inspiration, but your track is mostly out of key or harmony.
For melodies being played in the same time, they all need to have at least 1 theoretical chord-line in common, and be in the same music key. You can make exceptions of course, but only if they sound good. As for bass and similar stuff, they are recommended to follow the root note of current theoretical chord.
I recommend creating theoretical chords for every part of the track that should have different harmony (just keep in mind that there can be more options for a single melody). That will make things easier as you will have help writing or making up your melody. and with creating chords that are actually going to be played in the track (which are usually re-arranged theoretical chords).
If you don't feel like bothering yourself making theoretical chords, check inside your mind for melodies (which should be combined) to suit each other. That's how you'll check if they are harmonic.
As for the music key, you'll hardly figure that out within your mind, yo you'll have to adjust it within your program.
I suggest you to remake this remix fixing keys, harmony and stuff, because you have talent that should not be wasted.
Cheers for your feedback, I've decided to do some rework on this track then.
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http://www.soundcloud.com/hedgehog-charger
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