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yy@spiritcalling
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Japan
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Joined: Dec, 2012
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 Posted - 2012/12/06 : 16:14:17
Dear happy hardcore lovers.
Nice to meet you.
I'm new japanese dj.
I began to make track 1 month ago.
Please listen my track,give me advice.
http://soundcloud.com/spiritca/holyland
Great thanks for happy hardcore forums.
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tru bass
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United Kingdom
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Joined: Jul, 2006
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 Posted - 2012/12/06 : 20:03:07
Sounds pretty nice mate.
I like the breakbeat sections.
The structure is certainly interesting, what with the large introduction before the bass line.
Loving the background bell arpeggio towards the end of the 1st section.
Love the slight tune fluctuations in the bell(?) sound at the start of the breakdown/buildup.
Found myself getting a bit lost with respect to the beat at ~3.05.
I like the bass in the second section but it's a bit flat.
Maybe shift the introduction of the bass/breakbeat section to ~0.50 by removing 0.50-1.11?
I would make the breakdown/buildup a bit shorter.
I would also make the crescendo a bit more momentous, applying a filter to the main lead and automating it with respect to time may do the trick with a nice building snare roll.
Nice sounding tune overall though mate, these are merely suggestions.
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yy@spiritcalling
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Japan
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Joined: Dec, 2012
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Posted - 2012/12/07 : 16:40:27
Dear tru bass.
Very thanks for listening and advicing.
I'm glad you enjoyed my track,sending soul.
Your suggestions is very helpful.
I would like to make trick,volume control & fx automation,snare rollcas well.
I challenge it in next track.
And I would like more powerful bass sound as you say.
I use bassline,all synth sound by "refx Nexus".
"Nexus" lead and arpeggio are very good sound,but bass sound is deficient power.
I would like to get "Spectrasonic Trilian"
I'll make next track better for you and me.
Thanks!
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