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Mark p
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 Posted - 2012/12/15 : 16:17:46
Here is the link
http://soundcloud.com/mark-pey/paradise-update
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Warnman
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 Posted - 2012/12/15 : 19:44:24
The main riff so far sounds good and I really like the piano, but I think you need to work on your percussion instruments. The kick definately needs to be more punchier and the rest sounds a little bit simple/empty. Keeping the hi-hat in the background might be OK to avoid a too trancy beat, but to my opinion you should point out every second kick as well. Gosh, I don't know correct term for it. You know, where usually claps ore something else are added to create a fake breakbeat feeling.
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Mark p
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Posted - 2012/12/15 : 21:14:18
Thankyou very much for the feedback, It's still work in progress so I'll try a few things, and keep a look out for an update to see how things are sounding :)
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Phobz
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Posted - 2012/12/16 : 10:13:51
It's sounding really nice - the quality is a bit low so it's hard to say with perc etc. Love the piano / breakbeat part. The progression at the intro really had me, works perfect :)
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Mark p
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Posted - 2012/12/30 : 11:38:40
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Originally posted by Phobz:
It's sounding really nice - the quality is a bit low so it's hard to say with perc etc. Love the piano / breakbeat part. The progression at the intro really had me, works perfect :)
Thankyou, appreciated mate, I'm gonna get stuck back into this after new year :)
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_Jay_
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Posted - 2012/12/30 : 14:45:51
Yeah, agree with the other chaps - piano is lovely. So's the vocal. Nice work mate.
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Mark p
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Posted - 2012/12/30 : 18:07:41
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Originally posted by _Jay_:
Yeah, agree with the other chaps - piano is lovely. So's the vocal. Nice work mate.
Cheers jay, happy with that :)
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Charger
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Posted - 2012/12/30 : 19:41:45
The arrangement of the track is good. And I'm pleased with the vox processing of the track too.
However, the bass is a little too nasal and muddy, try sweetening the bass a little and it'll be a slammer.
Cheers!
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Lorenzo.Tweakn
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Posted - 2012/12/30 : 20:00:28
to get the bass better.
Saw Layer-Make a bass using mostly Saw Oscs, distort, High Pass at 200Hz, EQ the mids up & take off everything under 200hz
Mid Range Layer- -1 Saw & -2 Square Oscs, keep it clean as possible, eq the mids to make it sound "warm"
Sub Layer- Sine Wave & Squares. EQ everything under 200hz's. Low Pass at 1500hz.
The Lead
make it less "dry"(reverb, delay. http://kunz.corrupt.ch/products/tal-dub dub 3) then EQ or HP everything under 150hz,
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Mark p
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Posted - 2012/12/31 : 00:20:55
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Originally posted by Charger:
The arrangement of the track is good. And I'm pleased with the vox processing of the track too.
However, the bass is a little too nasal and muddy, try sweetening the bass a little and it'll be a slammer.
Cheers!
Cheers man, I'll have a play with it when I'm back onit
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Mark p
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Posted - 2012/12/31 : 00:22:31
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Originally posted by Lorenzo.Tweakn:
to get the bass better.
Saw Layer-Make a bass using mostly Saw Oscs, distort, High Pass at 200Hz, EQ the mids up & take off everything under 200hz
Mid Range Layer- -1 Saw & -2 Square Oscs, keep it clean as possible, eq the mids to make it sound "warm"
Sub Layer- Sine Wave & Squares. EQ everything under 200hz's. Low Pass at 1500hz.
The Lead
make it less "dry"(reverb, delay. http://kunz.corrupt.ch/products/tal-dub dub 3) then EQ or HP everything under 150hz,
Big thankyou, I'll deffo be trying all this, cheers for the help :)
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_Jay_
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Posted - 2012/12/31 : 00:23:16
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I'll have a play with it when I'm back onit
That's what she said!! OhhhooooooOOOooooOOOooo!!!
lol, sorry.
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Mark p
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Posted - 2012/12/31 : 00:46:22
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Originally posted by _Jay_:
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Originally posted by Mark p:
I'll have a play with it when I'm back onit
That's what she said!! OhhhooooooOOOooooOOOooo!!!
lol, sorry.
Haha, I set that up nicely
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